Primary 4 English student writing works (Second Term)

日期: 13/04/2018

Primary 4

4A Lau Cheuk Hei, Rex (12)

The ending of the story book “This is Our House”

George went in the house. The children all raised their hands. “THIS HOUSE IS FOR EVERYONE!” shouted the children.

The children started to play different games.

‘Let’s play hide-and-seek, that’s fun!’ said Marly.

‘NO! It’s not fair, you always win!’ said Luther. Then they fought in the house. Some children crashed into the house. Suddenly the paper house was torn.

George said, “What shall we do?”

Sophie suggested, ”Let’s fix our house!”

Freddie said, “Good, I’ll go home to get some tapes.”

Lindy said, ‘Also, I’ll get some wood to fix the wall.’

They got some paper roll, glue, scissors and plastic bag.

They used the tapes, glue and scissor to repair the house first. Then they used the wood to fix the wall.

When they finished, they were very happy because they can play in the house again!

             

             

4A Tse Shuk Yee, Suki (27)

A wonderful Day Trip with My Cousin

  Hi! I’m Sarah. I am a Japanese and I visited in Hong Kong with my cousin Sally.

  Today we went to Mai Po because Sally likes birds very much! We took a lot of photos with the beautiful birds.

  Then we went to Hong Kong Wetland Park. It is in Tin Shui Wai and we went there by bus. We saw Pui Pui, the crocodile. It was so cute. We had afternoon tea in a café. It was next to the Wetland Park. I ordered a cup of lemon tea and Sally ordered a mango cake. They were yummy.

  In the evening, we took the Peak Tram to go to Victoria Peak. We saw the night view. It was fantastic. Next, we went shopping. I bought some key rings and Sally bought a doll.

  We felt so happy and I hope I can have a wonderful day trip with Sally again!

                

               

4B Chung Tsz Wing (6)

My opinion on TV programme

     What is your favourite TV programme? My favourite TV programme is Running Man.

     It’s a game show. I like it because it’s fun and interesting. They make me laugh a lot. I like watching the show because those people are funny.

     I don’t like Bob Silly Fox. It’s a cartoon character. I don’t like it because it is silly. I think it is not very funny.

     I will never watch the Bob Sill forever.

               

              

4B Lau Hiu Ching, Giselle (13) 

Tourist Spots in Hong Kong

There are a lot of interesting places you can visit in Hong Kong. Let me tell you three of them.

     First you can go to Lantau Island and spent a whole day in Disneyland from breakfast to dinner. You can enjoy all in Hong Kong Disneyland.

     The next day, you may go to visit the Big Buddha on Lantau Island. You may also enjoy the vegetarian dish. It is yummy and healthy. Then, you can go to Tsim Sha Tsui by MTR. You can visit the Avenue of Stars and take some beautiful photos. You can go shopping too.

     Finally, you can go to Sai Kung by car. You may eat seafood, do water sports and go hiking.

     I hope you will like the places in Hong Kong.

           

              

4C Lo Ka Po, Angela (20)

A wonderful Day Trip with My cousin

Last Saturday, my cousin Sally and I had a trip in Hong Kong. We were excited.

First we went to the Big Buddha on Lantau Island by cable car because Sally is a Buddhist. After that, we ate vegetarian food there. It was Sally’s favourite food so she was happy.

Next, we went to Tsim Sha Tsui by bus in the afternoon. We went shopping in the shopping centres. We bought a lot gifts for our friends. We took some photos on the Avenue of Stars too.

In the evening, we went to the Peak by Peak Tram. We looked at the night view of Hong Kong and took some nice photos there.

Sally and I were very enjoyable on that day. I hope we can play every day. We had a wonderful day together.

           

                 

4C Wang Yik Hei, Harris (27)

Script writing for “This is Our House”

George went in the house. The children all raised their hands. “THIS HOUSE IS FOR EVERYONE!” shouted the children.

The children had a party in the house. They played paper-scissor-stone. They also played the Flight 505 together. They felt cheerful. Suddenly the paper house was torn.

George said, “What shall we do?”

Sophie suggested, “Let’s fix our house!”

Freddie said, “Good, I’ll go home to get some tapes.”

Freddie went home and took a lot of tapes and scissors with Luther. Charlene and Marlene brought the crayons from home and Lindy took some papers. George, Lindy and Marly drew some flowers and windows on the house. Then, Charlene and Marlene used the tapes to fix the house. Luther used the scissor to cut the windows. Doctor Sophie checked the house.

Finally, they finished and felt good. They had an unforgettable afternoon.

           

           

4D Wang Chris Sen Yu ( 25 )

A Script for This is our house

    George went in the house. The children all raised their hands. “THIS HOUSE IS FOR EVERYONE!” shouted the children.

   All the children felt excited. Luther played with his jumbo jet. Freddie jumped up and down. Sophie ran around in the house. The paper house was too crowded because there was no space for all the children. George stepped on the walls of the paper house. Suddenly the paper house was torn.

George said, “What shall we do?”

Sophie suggested, “Let’s fix our house!”

Freddie said, “Good, I’ll go home to get some tapes.”

They got some tapes. They glued the walls of the paper house together. Then, Luther used some thick string to tie the house tightly. Next, the girls drew some beautiful flowers with some crayons on the walls.

In the end, the children finished fixing the paper house. All the children said, “This is the best paper house ever!” They played in the house again.

                 

                   

4D Yeung Yui Chit, Kurt ( 31 )

A Wonderful Day Trip with My Cousin

Last Saturday, I visited Hong Kong with my cousin Sally. I visited many places in Hong Kong.

    First, we went to Sai Kung. We did exciting water sports and went hiking. The air was fresh. We also ate seafood in a restaurant. It was delicious.

    We visited Tsim Sha Tsui too. It was a good place for buying gifts because there were many shopping malls. Apart from it, we took photos on the Avenue of Stars. It was amazing.

    The Peak was the last place we visited. We looked at the night view of Hong Kong. We had a yummy dinner there.

    I enjoyed my wonderful trip with my cousin. I hope I can go to these three places again soon. 
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